A&P A few from tonight v. will be updating

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  1. aCab

    aCab New Member

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    Hey guys, shot these this evening, then had some beers. Editing now. Will be updating for the next few hours. All editing done in LR. What do you think?
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    I know i need to fix the hair over her eye. Don't have PS on this comp.
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  2. pawis

    pawis werd em up

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    i like 1... but what is she holding onto in back?

    2, i dunno if its just their pose, but im not diggin' it much, maybe a tighter crop(lots of nothing going on on the top part of image)
     
  3. hash browns

    hash browns lolcathlon champion OT Supporter

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    pic #1

    where the hand is placed ... kind of strange
     
  4. cgper

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    halo in #2 is very distracting
     
  5. aCab

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    added more shitty pics. Enjoi.
     
  6. Devin

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    it looks good dude. work on them skin tones like we talked about it and it rules. i suck at shooting people though so dont take my word for it.
     
  7. hash browns

    hash browns lolcathlon champion OT Supporter

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    #4 too close

    #6 this is the best angle for her

    #3 lamps behind her back and in the background are very distracting
     
  8. siniquezu

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    Looks good!

    3-light falls off on the jeans
    4+5- her face is at a bad angle or something and makes her look fat (compared to 6)

    I need your email too I lost my PMs when my sub ran out :o
     
  9. wrong1

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    I like 1 and 6. On one I do agree that her hand seems a bit out of place.
     
  10. JDizzy92

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    Nice pictures. I like 1 and 6 the most. I agree that 4 is too close and 5 the tones are kinda light. Her face looks kinda pail(sp?) in it. Is that girl Korean?
     
  11. siniquezu

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    btw who are these chicks and why aren't there asit :big grin:
     
  12. Smeghead

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    I like all of them except the last one :)
     
  13. fuzzynaval

    fuzzynaval Enlighten me

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    i like 1 the best. 6 and 7 are pretty cool.
     
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    AWESOME location in #2, love it... but the girls heads look too distorted? or do they just have big forheads :hs:

    you got some hard lighting, and soft, but overall a bangin set.
    2 and 5 are my favs
    (2 would be awesome if the girls were... hotter)
     
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    I like 1 and 6 the best. 1 would be my favorite if you could clone our her hand in the back.
     
  16. aCab

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    FFFUUUUUU shoulda gone easy on the desaturation last night. Will post more today.
     
  17. NOR*CAL

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    Nice pics, but they don't seem that sharp.

    Shirt needs to be fixed in #2, but otherwise they're all nice.
     
  18. aCab

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    Damnit, you're right. My LR export was on 60% Quality and I didn't notice. Fawk.
     
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    Nice work, good set overall!
     
  20. 1.8

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    They're all soft and the tones on the skin are way way too cool. Let me guess, AWB and a flash? Try a warming filter, and don't preserve the luminosity.
     
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    they looks good. just some of them are soft
     
  22. Bloody Sunday

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    shoes are untied
     

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