A&P A couple of pictures i took today. C&C please

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  1. Curren$y

    Curren$y New Member

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    Hey guys i went shooting today after the help you guys have been giving me. I feel as if i'm improving but i'm not sure. Comments and critique please. Thanks

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    The first and last need wayyyyy more saturation/vibrance, I can hardly see the colors and the other needs more inappropriate vignetting.
     
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    I like the 2nd one, although the vignetting is a bit harsh.
    I remember playing @ Gas Works as a kid :(
     
  4. TaVeRaVe

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    I love them!
     
  5. FusionZ06

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    Second one is cool fix the horizon and I like the vignette.
     
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    I like number two, and the way the horizon is. I think the pipe paralell to the ground is actually straight, it's the ground that is crooked. The pipes perpendicular are straight as well.
     
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    Notice that the sky is different on #1 on the left and right side...
     
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    :werd:

    first thing I said was 'holy fuck that's red.'
     
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    i like 2
     
  10. FindersKeepers

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    dont cut off the front of the truck.

    less vibrance/sat, make it look more natural

    Back off on the un-needed vignetting
     
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    Go easy on the pp there buddy :hsugh:
     
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    First is very colorful

    2 is a cool shot
     
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    Bob ADU elitist prick

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    what's with the norwegian flag? :o
     
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    Norway is the little sister city of Seattle :coold:
     
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    love the 2nd and 3rd shot. The PP in the second is what makes the picture for me. #3 is just awesome.
     

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