A&P A couple new pics that I would like critique on. thanks.

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  1. deathbystereo

    deathbystereo New Member

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    Here you go. Have at it. Taken with a pentax point and shoot. S40, 4 MP.

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    they are ok but nothing has you staring at a specific thing

    the middle one has its potential to that but it goes no where
     
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    I dig the first one. :cool:
    1152x864?
     
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    the first one is way too saturated...looks very fake. The second one looks the best, I just wish the car wasn't in it. The third one looks like you snapped a photo while driving.
     
  5. viva hate

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    Thanks for the pics.

    I really hated the power line in the first one.

    With the last one, perhaps just the towers against the sky would have been enough, the sun draws the eye and leaves more than half the picture as dead space.

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    I think it looked better with the powerline.
     
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    powerline looked better. and 2nd one would be best without the car
     
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    highway 5?
     
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  10. I dig the first 2, full res? :x:
     
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    :werd: about him sucking at PS

    and wtfnoise in the first one
     
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    i did a little somethin' somethin' to the 2nd one.. i kinda like it better this way..

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    Taking the sun out makes a big difference. :bigthumb:
     
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    Thanks a lot guys. Actually all of them were taken while in a car. We took the 101 to PCH. Then on the way back we did the 5. For some reason I always look at my view as a composition. Whenever I saw a certain rectangle of space that made me feel/enjoy something I tried my best to capture it.

    I don't really know what I'm shooting for when I put the pics in photoshop to mess with the levels and what not.
     
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    Here you go. Full sized and raw. Feel free to mess with them.

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    haha they look like shit full sized. oh well. serves me right for not stopping and taking out a good camera with a tripod.
     
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    Damn, it does look bad stopped down.
    I hate Casio. :hs:
     

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