A&P 4 Pictures from today - Venice Beach Ca

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  1. Creator

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    third one to me would be better if the chair was in focus and not the stairs.
     
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    All of them look a little soft...
     
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    the girl in 2nd pic has manlke hands
    agree they all arent sharp enough
     
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    isaac86hatch This thread sucks

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    Love the first one. The rest are meh. I don't really care that they are not all that sharp, but I really dislike the post-processing.
     
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    1 is way underexposed. It might improve with playing with the lighting. Good composition for just a caught-the-emotion-in-the-moment shot.

    2 woulda been awesome if I actually had one entire thing to focus on, whether it be the upper part of the girl or all of the words behind her.

    3 my eyes wander everywhere, and if it were me, I would have focused in on the paint can, not the chair behind it.

    4 is also underexposed, and the composition is boring. I try to be nice and suggest ways to improve shots, but I really don't see any way to do a thing with this one man.
     
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    All soft, 3 and 4 are overprocessed.
     
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    Better?
     
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    These are....pretty bad.

    Too shallow DOF, very dark, kinda desaturated?, the back of someones head..., some just OOF...
     

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